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Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Thursday, 6 December 2018

This is my ven diagram

Kia Ora This is my ven diagram and we are doing this so you know that what New zealand and Sweden.



graduation dinner

Kia Ora everyone. We had graduation dinner last night and it was a nice dinner. It was at the Ohaeawai Rugby Club. After that we got a Taonga. We got a photo as well for our dinner and we got the 2018 year book as well.

Wednesday, 7 November 2018

This is my Reading test

Kia ora  blogger we were wokign on our reading test.

this is our pattest

Kia Ora  yesterday i did a pat maths test and i think last team i got 26 out of 40 and this team i got 12 out of 40 so i think i ruched on this test .

Friday, 2 November 2018

This is my comic fofor the book we read class

Kia ora
 I have being learning how to write a comic on a book that we read in class. It is called  rock paper scissors.
This is my comic it is chair vs tv .


Wednesday, 31 October 2018

Explanation Writing

Kia ora this week we had to do a writing test. We had 40 minutes to get it done. We had to do writing about rubbish. Here is my work.- My results will be added next week.

Name:Shaedyn
Explanation Writing - Term 4                  Prompt: - - Write to describe one environmental problem and explain what people do to reduce its impact on the planet.

Think about:
  • What your reader needs to know about the topic
  • How you are going to introduce the topic
  • The order of your ideas and how you link them
  • What to include in your summary

Remember to:
  • Choose your words carefully
  • Take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
  • Edit - add or delete words or sentences to improve your work

Start Writing Here:
A problem is a something about rubbish is a introduce.
So not change out rubbish of your widon.
We pick up rubbish everyday we have a manote of rubbish we have to pick up so hour school
Tied so when people come in to hour school they think that hour school tied and they say we look like a good school to come to because it looks so tied then my room and it tighter than the afuera then the afuera  school because it the most tieds up hair at the moment so we can get the awes this year again so we can show them we are the best and we can show the cruise.


So now do you get what i mean  thank you for listening to by in introduce !

Thursday, 18 October 2018

Grandparents

Kia ora this is my Grandparents poem I wrote because our school is having Greats and Grand day on Friday.  We also wrote an explanation about an issue grandparents face and how they can cope with it.




Beginning
Title back pain
How Grandparents Cope with back pain.
1st paragraph
Define and describe what you are explaining.

A grandparent is a person who is old enough for their baby to have a baby. When people start to get old different parts of their bodies start to get worn out and they can no longer do what they could do before. This is called aging and it causes many problems. One aging problem that a grandparent may have to deal with is back pain.








Middle
2nd paragraph
Write about one thing you can do to cope with back pain.
One thing that a grandparent can do to cope with back pain is relax. Sleep is good for relaxing.
3rd paragraph
Write about a second thing you can do to cope with back pain
A second thing they can do is to invest in a good back doctor. This will increase their ability to move around to run.
4th paragraph
Write about a third thing you can do to cope with hearing loss back pain
A third thing is get a massage to help walk a bit better. When you get a massage it helps you relax.
End
5th paragraph
Wind up your writing.
Back pain can be a difficult aging problem for grandparents to deal with but people are hopeful that improvements in technology will be  a big help for this in the future.

Tuesday, 25 September 2018

   This is my personal    recount about everything I did during our school ski trip to National Park in September 2018. It was a blast!

Wednesday, 21 March 2018

Dog simlie


Hi my name is Shaedyn.  My class has been learning about similes and here is mine.


Wednesday, 14 March 2018

Similes

We have been learning about similes using like and as.
We matched these pictures to make our own.




The flag blows in the wind like the girls hair.









The rubbish stinks like the smelly socks.





The man axe look is sharp is the lion teef.

Friday, 9 March 2018

NUrsery Rhyme Poetry



I have been learning about nursery rhymes and rhyming. I had to choose a nursery rhyme and change the nouns and names. I choose Hey Diddle Diddle.

Tuesday, 13 February 2018

Edited My Waitangi Recount


Kia ora i hope you enjoy my published recount more than my draft. I had to fix my spelling