Explanation Writing

Kia ora this week we had to do a writing test. We had 40 minutes to get it done. We had to do writing about rubbish. Here is my work.- My results will be added next week.

Name:Shaedyn

Explanation Writing - Term 4                  Prompt: - - Write to describe one environmental problem and explain what people do to reduce its impact on the planet.

Think about:

• What your reader needs to know about the topic
• How you are going to introduce the topic
• The order of your ideas and how you link them
• What to include in your summary

Remember to:

• Choose your words carefully
• Take care with your spelling, punctuation, and sentences
• Edit - add or delete words or sentences to improve your work

Start Writing Here:

A problem is a something about rubbish is a introduce. So not change out rubbish of your widon. We pick up rubbish everyday we have a manote of rubbish we have to pick up so hour school Tied so when people come in to hour school they think that hour school tied and they say we look like a good school to come to because it looks so tied then my room and it tighter than the afuera then the afuera  school because it the most tieds up hair at the moment so we can get the awes this year again so we can show them we are the best and we can show the cruise. So now do you get what i mean  thank you for listening to by in introduce !

Grandparents

Kia ora this is my Grandparents poem I wrote because our school is having Greats and Grand day on Friday.  We also wrote an explanation about an issue grandparents face and how they can cope with it.

Beginning	Title back pain	How Grandparents Cope with back pain.
	1st paragraph Define and describe what you are explaining.	A grandparent is a person who is old enough for their baby to have a baby. When people start to get old different parts of their bodies start to get worn out and they can no longer do what they could do before. This is called aging and it causes many problems. One aging problem that a grandparent may have to deal with is back pain.

Middle	2nd paragraph Write about one thing you can do to cope with back pain.	One thing that a grandparent can do to cope with back pain is relax. Sleep is good for relaxing.
	3rd paragraph Write about a second thing you can do to cope with back pain	A second thing they can do is to invest in a good back doctor. This will increase their ability to move around to run.
	4th paragraph Write about a third thing you can do to cope with hearing loss back pain	A third thing is get a massage to help walk a bit better. When you get a massage it helps you relax.
End	5th paragraph Wind up your writing.	Back pain can be a difficult aging problem for grandparents to deal with but people are hopeful that improvements in technology will be  a big help for this in the future.